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Savage Memories by =BlackWolfDS:iconBlackWolfDS:

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I can almost smell his fear…
That pungent stench of wounded prey
Stumbling to run
Stumbling to hide…

I can almost hear his screams…
Filled with horror of the beast
Yellow glowing eyes
Fangs as sharp as steel…

I can almost taste his blood…
As claws rip through fragile flesh
Breaking brittle bones
And satisfying the need to feed..

Oh what I wouldn’t give…
To do it all again…
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Spur of the moment is when the memories flow..

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=Kalira-Liadain Jan 23, 2009, 2:50:10 PM
Great piece, you can feel the feral-ness of it!

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Turn On, Tune In, Drop Out, Give Up With Me
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=BlackWolfDS Jan 25, 2009, 10:41:01 AM
Thanks :)

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The heart bares memories through scratches, scars, and marks.
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~flyingwolfangel Jan 20, 2009, 11:44:06 AM
it's been awhile since I've commented on your poems. this really reached out to me and I must say that I can honestly see, feel, hear, and taste everything you say. Very well written for a spur of the moment. And I agree with the comment of only doing it if the prey deserves it but as a pacifist wolf I try to hinder peace and tranqiulity but there are times that one must defend themselves or let the fangs out to be noticed. Again nicely written.
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=BlackWolfDS Jan 20, 2009, 9:54:50 PM
No worries about that and thank you very much. Lol if anything, honestly, a wolf can seek revenge is family and or pack is harmed. I think thats where this came from. Anyway thanks for stopping by :D

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The heart bares memories through scratches, scars, and marks.
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~flyingwolfangel Jan 21, 2009, 11:21:21 AM
oh yes if family is in harm or threatened you better believe that I will be going all out on whooping some ass. No one threatens my family especially my kids so yeah I see your point. And your welcome, catch you later
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*LoboSabio Jan 15, 2009, 6:02:13 PM
And so the food chain continues.

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"Ever tried. Ever failed. No matter. Try again. Fail again. Fail better." -Samuel Beckett

Silflay hraka, u embleer rah.
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=BlackWolfDS Jan 16, 2009, 12:31:32 AM
Aye it does

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The heart bares memories through scratches, scars, and marks.
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~SabreWolfQueen Jan 15, 2009, 3:56:46 PM
yet another great poem bro, i feel this to a part of some dream I've had. Hard to really explain, but this is great bro even for a spur of the moment poem^^

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TTFN -Joker-
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=BlackWolfDS Jan 16, 2009, 12:31:48 AM
Lol thank you :D And really? That's interesting :3

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The heart bares memories through scratches, scars, and marks.
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~zephirwolf Jan 15, 2009, 11:37:37 AM
yeah, that would feel so good... as for me, that'll only do if my prey is someone that deserves it :aww: pretty good

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Let that bloodlust be... UNLEASH THE BEAST!!!

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