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Pale light brightens the beaten path
Taken so many times in the past
Where one set of paws crush the leaves
Marking this land his territory, his home

Now the monthly run has come
Wolf is jumping out of the skin
A suit made of flesh and human bone
Wolf is ready to run on this full moon night

It always starts with a subtle itch
But leads to a burn, a passion of fire
Bright enough to melt and reshape
The bones and humanity of his form

Claws sprout from rounded fingernails
Ears stretch and perk straight up
As a long and profound muzzle appears
Slowly being covered in light brown fur

A groan of pain slips from his lupine formed maw
As his transformation makes it’s completion
Yellow amber eyes, a black leather nose
A bushy brown tail and hard padded paws

Again he was whole, wild, ready to be free
I don't remember when this was written. Probably a while ago when I was posting pictures. :shrug:
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:iconcanine-lupus:
Beautiful rhythm and flow to your words, and a nice, concise description of the werewolf transformation. :D
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:iconblackwolfds:
lol thanks again Lupus. The funny thing about this is that I don't remember when I wrote it or why ^^;
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:iconshadestorm:
Wow, the third stanza is awesome and woven together quite nicely. It's very powerful in the subject of the poem, yet it connects with many ideas outside the context it's in, which makes it even more powerful imo.
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:iconblackwolfds:
lol, thank you very much. I don't remember when I wrote it...nor why I wrote it. I'm pretty sure I was in a good mood ^^; But anyway, thank you. :)
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:icondark-shad0w:
:happycry: so beautiful.. what amazing talent with words you have
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:iconblackwolfds:
Awww, thank you Shadow, I appreciate it :)
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:iconeri-ahna:
i read that third paragraph over and over C:
its so lovely <3
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:iconblackwolfds:
Hahaha thanks Luna >:3 <3333
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KittyRose Aug 4, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely work:clap:
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