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I am the stellar wolf.
With eyes of amber,
Which hold fallen stars,
And that reflect the moon’s glow.

I am the Inferno wolf.
With my fiery heart,
That burns for a mate.
And the passion to run free.

I am the Aquatic wolf.
With my liquid movements,
That help calm my pack,
In times of confusion and pain.

I am the Wooded wolf.
With my pine needle fur,
That stands on end in fury,
When danger threatens my pack.

I am the Aero wolf.
With my bone chilling growls,
And my light hearted howls,
That reach even the heavens in the sky.

I am the Earthen wolf.
With my sand paper paws,
That help me grip,
And rip into the earth when I run.

I am the Elemental wolf.
Though I may seem strange,
With all my forms,
I am actually one.

With one heart,
One soul,
One desire,
I am the wolf.

*howls*
I'm not sure where this poem came from. ^^; but I started thinking of what I could write while walking home from the gym. I remember looking up into the sky, at the trees, at the ground....anything and everything. At first this was going to be call Earthen Wolf...but it wouldn't have made sense. So nI named it Elemental wolf for all the elements I talk about through out the poem.

I do, how ever...feel like there's something wrong with it. :/
What do you guys think? Ya, nay or *shrug* ? lol
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nnava4 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
kyaaaaa!!!!! Love, love it, love it!!! You are brilliant
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padfootmania Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
i think it's quite good how long did it take to write
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Thank you! It took maybe 15 minutes to write.
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:iconpadfootmania:
padfootmania Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
well its pretty good
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whitedragonblackcat Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Student General Artist
You did an amazing job on the poem its really good.
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kovulover2010 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
this is very good you hould get this published
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011
I'll keep that in mind :)
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SirusWolfStudios Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Professional Writer
totally inspired me just now.
about stellar wolf especially.
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011
:)
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dragongirl137 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011
wow... that is soo... soo... i dont even know what to say! :D
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
LOL I don't know what to say either :P
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Tae1234 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
WOWWWW
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011
o:
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Tae1234 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Its awseome
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
Well thank you :)
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Tae1234 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
:worship: :clap: amazing job
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
Thank you :D
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
np:)
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slavka11 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009
AMAZING
it so beautiful
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2009
Thank you :D
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slavka11 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2009
welcome
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micadori Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful~ especially that I feel like a wolf now *smiles sadly then howls*
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2009
Thank you ^_^
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micadori Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you welcome *bows* -^___^-
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BlueMoonKin Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
awesome. thats all i can say. this is just truely cool.
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2009
Thank you :3
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Sky-fyre Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008
amazing. *faves* ^^
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2008
Thanks.
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redthewolf Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
This. Is. AMAZING!
Black, there is ONE thing you could do to make ti better, and that is give it that cursive font.
I will be watching.

Red.
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2008
lol, thanks. But cursive isn't something I do. Thanks for the suggestion. ^^
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ZeviLoupGarou Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2007
It's such a wonderful poem, I never would have thought of it! Great job! XD

*howls*
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2007
Hey thanks! :D
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ZeviLoupGarou Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2007
Your welcome!
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teamMCV Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
powerful connections. comes across almost myth-like
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 23, 2007
thanks :D
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dontclickmyname Featured By Owner May 20, 2007
cool!
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LoboSabio Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
I don't think there's anything wrong. I like the creativity in describing each of the elemental forms.
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Thanks :]
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Uuley Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Woah... I can't find anything wrong with it:D Great job as always:)
(And as always, I'm still not good with words...) :+fav:
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Thank you :3
(Practice makes...BETTER! No such thing as perfect) :D
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Uuley Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
You're welcome:)

Haha, you're right... Who knows what perfect really is?
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:iconblackwolfds:
BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Hmmm...perfect is what makes you the happiest...maybe... but like you said, who knows? lol
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:iconuuley:
Uuley Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Heh:) Yup, perfect is perfect;)
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dried-blood Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
*sighs* If I could write like this..
Too good.
:+fav:
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
awww, well it's just like drawing. It takes a little practice and you also have to find your passion. Mine are wolves, so I write about them. Write about what makes you happy :)
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dried-blood Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Where to start...
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Dark-Shad0w Featured By Owner May 17, 2007
no, I don't think there's anything rong with it at all D tis very good
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BlackWolfDS Featured By Owner May 18, 2007
Thanks :]
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Kahea-wolfess Featured By Owner May 17, 2007
I love the various interpretations of each wolf. Showing how a family can be amongst one individual to protect those s/he loves.

I personally dont find anything wrong with it. :3

Great job as always.
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